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Reading week 6

so for todays reading/ writing assignment we had to complete our body paragraphs.
as you can see from last weeks blog post I had some major issues in finding credible sources and getting proper quotes I could use. I went on to get a look at what every else had done but only like two other people have actually wrote a paragraph which I was shocked about

I tried to stop focusing so much on getting quotes and instead I just wrote a solid body paragraph. It is kinda of confusing writing the body before you do the intro and I ma not sure why it is done this way in the first place but I am doing my best.

Each week I feel like My writing is greatly improving. This week I added way more content into my body paragraphs. I am very impressed at how far my writing has come on in such a short space of time and I actually look forward to writing a lot more now than I used to in the past

I hope you enjoyed reading my blog today and feel free to go ahead read my body paragraphs now.


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